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Monday, April 8, 2019

haswell qurey

Haswell query


I see trees around me like I was In a maze. I felt like I was  going to
pass out. After that we moved on to the third map. It was the longest
map out of all of them. Once we got back to the bus I fell asleep
because I was exhausted. When we got back to school. we had a little
play on the playground because It was still teacher play. It was a good
thing that it was on Friday because it would be a good sleep because it
would be the weekend so we would sleep in Kapoof In bed when i
went to bed I was still awake playing fortnight i fell asleep after that.
now that's my story of the haswell query.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Toni, I have enjoyed reading your blog post. I liked your use of adjectives to enhance the meaning of your story. I like how you added in your feelings about the day. You felt exhausted and so did I! Next time you could add a small blurb about your story.

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  2. Hi Toni, I have enjoyed looking\reading your post I liked your part where you said "when i went to bed I was still awake playing fortnight" it is amazing. Maybe next time you could add a blurb to your post.

    -Riansha

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